Add Power and Clarity to Your Proposals

We all know that a picture is worth a thousand words. That’s as true in proposals as in any other document. Graphics can help you get across a complex set of ideas in a very compressed space. Evaluators like graphics that let help them see the points you are trying to make instead of making

The Most Important Section in Your Proposal

Which section is the most important one in your proposal? Some will say it’s the offer itself-the product or service you are proposing to your customer. Others will say it’s the pricing section-what the service will cost the customer. I’ve heard compelling arguments that the Executive Summary (or the cover letter, if you choose to

Discover How to Keep Your Reader on Track

A transition is way to move smoothly from sentence to sentence, paragraph to paragraph or section to section. It’s an indicator to the reader that what’s about to be said is related to what you just said. You can use one-word transitions or multi-word phrases. You can also use full sentences. Use transitions between sentences.

Help Your Readers: Get Rid of the Fog in Proposals

We all know unclear writing when we see it.  Long sentences, lots of big words.  Technical writing is filled with it.  So are proposals, especially those written by technical experts. Contrary to prevailing opinions that “engineers can’t write,” my experience tells me that engineers—and other technically-oriented folks—write very well. Their sentences are often extremely elegant

Tips for Writing Your Proposal's First Draft

Okay, you’ve figured out what you’re going to sell, you’ve planned your strategy, you’ve planned your proposal project, and you’ve gotten the rest of the proposal team on board. It’s finally time to write. How you go about writing the first draft–where you do it, which part you begin with, whether you write it out

Writing the Related Experience Section Proposal

When asking for proposals to provide services, clients frequently require descriptions of relevant projects. And being a conscientious proposal writer, you always respond. The problem is that too often you probably select the projects that you know are relevant and tuck them into the “Related Experience” section but don’t let the client know exactly how

Discover The Best Way to Sell Yourself in A Proposal

I realize you have heard this before. I know my clients have (I say it all the time, like a broken record). But I’ll say it again: Your client buys what you’re selling because she perceives it as having some benefit to her! That’s maybe obvious.  But here’s something that isn’t so obvious: You need to

Does Style and Tone of Writing Matter in Proposal Writing?

Style and tone matter a great deal in proposal writing. The customer’s selection process is really a process of elimination. Your job is to make it as hard as possible for him to eliminate your proposal. One way you can do this is to keep your writing from boring him to death. That’s a sure

Your Proposal's Cover: First Impressions Count!

True story: A client of mine visited one of his clients, a director of public works. It was simply a “touch base” call—Hi, I’m alive, just thought I’d meet and we could talk. On the way out my client asked the director “Oh, by the way, I’m curious—what do you like to see in a

Presenting to the Client After Proposal Submittal—Part One

This article is directed at those who have already submitted their proposal and have been invited to make a presentation to a selection panel.  If your client has required you to make your actual proposal in person, many of these tips will help, but you must address other needs as well. We’ll talk about those